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i am the first-born son of my parents. they have taught me that i have to work hard and sincerely whether someone watches me or not
i have grown up with an attitude that i try hard enough. now i am living with appreciation and respect for my parents for all they have done for me
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the time that i flew to canada and lived there, were my special experiences, which made me understand phrase, i can do it. while i was going to canada by plane, which went via japan an the u
s. , i safely arrived in canada in spite of delayed departure in the transfer station
i entered the country with my poor english without any troubles in the immigration. i lived by myself in canada, working for my living expenses such as rent, transportation, studying, etc
i went to europe with friends who were from other countries with the money that i saved while working.
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