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Nassau Community College (NCC)
has provided me many things. I took all the prerequisite courses and learned essential knowledge for business major. Moreover, I adjusted myself to American educational culture which is different from Korean¡¯s. However, my goal is to be a financial analyst, and I definitely cannot stop. I must further my education. I need an academic program that is directly related to finance and help me fulfill my goal.
On top of that, there is more
important reason. Before I came to NCC, I was a student of Hongik University in Korea. A few days after I got into the university, my mother passed away by heart attack. A friend¡¯s death is tragic enough to make a person¡¯s life miserable. Imagine what her death did to mine. She was the hope of my life that shed light and guided me. She was the greatest mentor, supporter and believer. She used to tell me that the God sent her to this world to raise me to be one of the greatest people in the earth. I made a lot of trouble in my life that definitely let her down, but her belief toward me was never shaken. She never had a doubt about me. I was extremely shocked and felt as if I had lost everything when she died, even the meaning of my existence. I gave up almost everything. The only two things I couldn¡¯t give up were the precious memory of her and English which she mostly wanted me to learn. My father tried to put me back in a normal life. He sent me to school by force, but I wasn¡¯t interested at all. I was a person who had given up almost everything.
While I couldn¡¯t let her go a
nd was suffering in pain, my academic performance was a disaster. I was absent many times. I screwed up everything except English courses. I think she wanted to send me study abroad and that is why she emphasized the importance of English to me. I was attending the school because of my father, but it didn¡¯t work at all. I couldn¡¯t recover from the shock.
However, something put me bac
k on track: My father cried, asking me not to live like that. I had never seen him crying so sadly except when mother died. I realized that I was causing my family pain and that is the last thing I should do. I slowly recovered from the pain. I began to work, exercise and do voluntary work. Moreover, I made a perfect decision--serving in the military--that enabled me to become mentally and physically strong, and changed me from negative to positive.
Although I have a dark side i
n my past, I sincerely believe the severe pain ultimately had a positive impact on me; I overcame the worst hardship in my life, and the army made me strong. It was a huge loss. However, the loss wasn¡¯t all. I¡¯ve gained many valuable qualities and unforgettable experiences. I moved on from the tragedy and learned the power of being positive from the obstacles I had been through. Now, I feel very happy when I study because unlike before, I have objectives that I want to achieve. I hope to transfer to a four year university and have much deeper knowledge. I want to challenge more. Finally, I hope to accomplish my ultimate dream, being a leader in the field of finance.
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