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My life is like a human drama.
It has tragedy, nightmare-like dark ages, unique experience and significant changes.
My mother passed away when I
was 19. A friend¡¯s death is tragic enough to make a person¡¯s life miserable. Imagine what my mother¡¯s death did to mine. I was extremely shocked and felt as if I had lost everything when she died, even the meaning of my existence. I gave up everything. My father tried to put me back in a normal life. He sent me to the school by force, but I wasn¡¯t interested at all. I was a person who had given up everything.
However, something put me bac
k on track: My father cried, asking me not to live like that. I had never seen him crying so sadly except when mother died. I realized that I was causing my family pain and that is the last thing I should do. I slowly recovered from the shock. I began to work, exercise and do voluntary work.
On Dec. 2005, I made one of t
he biggest decisions in my life. I decided to challenge myself by serving in the military. I wanted to change my personality entirely; it had been too soft, and irresponsible. I had low self-esteem. I wanted to be mentally and physically strong. When I entered The Republic of Korea Army on March 2006, everything was different. Officers yelled, swore, trained me, and gave me orders. Every time I made a mistake or fell down during training, I was punished or forced to stand up and continue. I was changing quickly as I fought against myself in such a harsh environment.
About nine months later, The
Ministry of National Defense was accepting volunteers for Iraq War. It was the perfect chance that could turn me into a totally different person. Not only that, I could contribute to peacekeeping. I immediately volunteered and got a spot. When I first arrived in Iraq, I remembered the pictures of South Korea in 1950¡¯s. It was ruined because of the Korean War. Iraq wasn¡¯t really different from that. Children lost their parents, buildings were collapsed and injured people were everywhere. Many people came for food and treatment to Zaytun(meaning ¡°olive¡± in Arabic) Division where I was dispatched. I dealt with various kinds of military supplies including 40,000 units of medical supplies in addition to interpreting and translating for US detachment troops in Zaytun Division. Moreover, I was a leader of my squad. It was a heavy task. On May, 2007, there was a vehicle bomb attack at Erbil near the division. Numerous injured people came to Zaytun hospital. It was literally a chaos. The days in Iraq were exhausting, but something lighted up my passion and kept me diligent. I could keep up all my tasks because of the injured people who had lost their hopes. There were children who had lost their mothers and fathers. As a person who experienced a parental death, I could truly understand how they felt and helped them at all cost.
When I came back from Iraq, p
eople treated me like a hero. I recovered my confidence and became much more positive. After I finished the remaining period of the service, I was discharged. I felt as if I had been reborn. I felt as if I had defeated the dark side of myself. With such life-time valuable experience, the qualities I earned in the army and the obstacles I¡¯ve been through, I now believe there is nothing that I cannot overcome.
After the discharge, I decide
d to study a business program in New York, which has the most diverse culture, race and ethnicity because I want to be a financial analyst and believe such environment is critical to be a global businessman. Moreover, I wanted to build many life-time valuable experiences and gain fundamental knowledge and a business mind. I believed Nassau Community College would be a good starting point and stepping-stone onto my path to success. I was very serious about my educational career. I could never fail my plan and studied very hard. Because of my devoting efforts and interests, I have earned 48 credits with a 3.94 GPA at NCC.
Since my dream is to be a fin
ancial analyst, I cannot stop. I must further my education. I want to transfer to schools with great business programs such as NYU¡¯s Stern Business School or Cornell University and study finance. I have high hopes of achieving my dream, and the ability to vent out my passions with the help of outstanding professors and excellent programs at a four year institution.
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