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Many people like to travel. O
f course, I like to travel, too. In one book, it was saying that humans have a habit of hunting and gathering in the past, so they have come to like to go around somewhere.
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Traveling can relieve stress
that has accumulated. You can go to a strange place, experience various things, and enjoy a free feeling. Also, you can forget about your hard daily life for a while in a different place.
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¼ö ÀÖ´Ù. Ç×»ó ±³°ú¼­¿¡¼­¸¸ ¹è¿ì°í µé¾î¿Ô´ø °ÍÀ» ´«À¸·Î Á÷Á¢ º¼ ¼ö ÀÖ´Ù. »çÁøÀ¸·Î¸¸ º¸´Â °Í°ú Á÷Á¢ ´«À¸·Î º¸´Â °ÍÀº ºÐ¸í ´Ù¸¥ ´À³¦ÀÏ °ÍÀÌ´Ù.
If you travel, you can see a
wide range of historical relics. You can see with your own eyes what you've always learned and heard from textbooks. It must be a different feeling to see it with your own eyes than with just a picture.
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ÀÖ´Ù. ¹°·Ð Çѱ¹¿¡µµ ´Ù¾çÇÑ ¿Ü±¹ À½½ÄÀ» ¿ä¸®ÇÏ´Â À½½ÄÁ¡ÀÌ ÀÖ´Ù. ÇÏÁö¸¸ ÇöÁö¿¡¼­ »ç ¸Ô´Â À½½ÄÀÇ ¸À°ú Çѱ¹¿¡¼­ ¸Ô´Â ¸ÀÀº ºÐ¸í ´Ù¸£´Ù.
Also, you can taste new food
if you travel to other countries. Of course, there are restaurants in Korea that cook various foreign foods. However, the taste of local food and food we eat in Korea are definitely different.
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You can also experience cultu
ral differences through travel. People in that country can see and experience how they live and what form they live in. This must be a difficult part to experience if you stay only in Korea.
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You can also develop a spirit
of challenge through traveling. You can develop a spirit of challenge and adventure by studying to travel to new places and trying out unfamiliar things you've never done before. This can make both the body and mind healthy.
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On the other hand, it is an o
pportunity to realize the importance and love of my country, my family, and friends. Spending time with strangers in unfamiliar places reminds me of things I am familiar with.
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